写作技巧-六级写作
七种提分的写作技巧 1不要总是以有生命的名词或人称代词开头 [例1]People experience many great changes in the last half century. 低分 Over the last half century the pace of change in the life of human beings has increased beyond our wildest expectation. 高分 [例2]Students should certainly make continuous efforts. 低分 Continuous efforts on the part of students are certainly required. 高分 技巧找到原句中的非生命的名词短语，把它变成主语。
[例3] birth control is quite necessary in China. 低分 It is widely/commonly thought/believed/held/accepted that birth control is quite necessary in China. 高分 技巧使用主语从句。Many people thinkIt is widely/commonly thought/believed/held/accepted.. [例4]More and more people agree/realize/are aware that women should enjoy full equality with men. 低分 There is a growing agreement/realization/awareness that women should enjoy full equality with men. 高分 技巧使用存在句there be句型。More and more people agree/realize/are aware that...There is a growing agreement/realization/awareness that ... [例5]Many Chinese people have gone to the United states in the past 15 years. 低分 The past 15 years have brought many Chinese people to the United States. 高分 技巧用时间词作主语。效果非常好。如The last half of the 20th century has seen/witnessed many great breakthroughs in every aspect. 1. 英语中被动句的使用频率远远高于汉语。
[例1]They make a lot of innovations to make money for a few people. 低分 A lot of innovations are made to with the aim of making money for a few people. 高分 技巧宾语变主语。
[例2]We may think more of the elderly who live apart from their children. 低分 More thought may be given to the elderly who live apart from their children. 高分 技巧动词变名词。
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